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ESSAY WRITING

Yes, this is a LOT to read, BUT there is a LOT of useful information.  You will have a better understanding of how to write you essay's.  There is a link at the bottom of this page for some example essays.  So give it a try!  

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  • Writing an application essay that is memorable and engages the reader can have a big impact on

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  • whether you win a scholarship. It is one of the few selection criteria that is completely under your

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  • control.

     

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  • Read the directions. Read and follow the directions. Sometimes the directions can clarify the

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  • intent of the question. If you don't follow the directions, you will give the scholarship committee a

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  • negative impression, telling them that you can't or won't follow instructions.

     

  • Do not skip questions. If a question does not apply to you, write "Not Applicable". Do not leave any

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  • question blank. An incomplete application will be rejected.

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  • Write about something you find interesting. Chances are, if you are passionate about a topic, you'll

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  • be able to write a more interesting essay about the topic.

     

  • If you find it difficult to write essays, try talking about the essay topic while recording the

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  • conversation. After you're done, transcribe the recording and edit it into essay form. This will

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  • give you a good start on your essay. The key to writing a good essay is to make it interesting, and

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  • the key to that is to write about something you are passionate about. Since the act of writing

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  • often interferes with the flow of ideas (most people can think and speak ten times faster than

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  • they can write or type), speaking into a tape recorder can help you capture your ideas and

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  • emotions better than staring at a blank piece of paper.

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  • Try to find a unifying theme that binds together the threads of your background into a tapestry

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  • that shows not only where you have been and where you are now, but where you will go in the

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  • future. This will provide a sense of direction and cohesiveness.

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  • Write an outline for your essays. Writing an outline can help provide focus and structure to the

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  • essay. Too many application essays are written in a stream of consciousness style, which jumps

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  • from point to point and rambles without connecting one thought to another. Using an outline will

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  • allow you to present your arguments and ideas in a manner that supports your conclusions,

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  • yielding a more powerful essay.

     

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  • Give concrete examples. When answering application questions or writing application essays,

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  • support your statements with concrete examples. For example, if you say that one of your best

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  • qualities is leadership, give an example where you demonstrated leadership. Similarly, a question

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  • about community service should not be answered with a vague "I like helping others and feel that

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  • it is important", but should also include specific examples where you have helped others.

     

  • This can have a big impact on whether you win the award. If your application is filled with vague

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  • and abstract answers, the selection committee doesn't have any way of evaluating your

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  • qualifications. Selection committees never accept an applicant's self-evaluation at face value. If you

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  • give them concrete examples, they can form their own opinion and cite those experiences and

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  • accomplishments as evidence in support of their opinion.

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  • The only situation in which self-evaluation is appropriate is when you are writing about how an

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  • experience affected you. In such a situation you are the only source of information about your

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  • personal reaction. But do not limit the essay to how you felt about the experience. Instead, also

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  • talk about how it affected your future actions. By linking your feelings to concrete examples and

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  • actions, you allow the committee to judge how the experience affected you through a tangible

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  • result.

 

 

  • Don't exaggerate. Stretching the truth can hurt your application. For example, if you list

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  • photography as a hobby on an application for a science scholarship, don't be surprised if you're

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  • asked to explain the chemical reactions that make photography possible during your interview.

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  • Selection committees are good at detecting when a student exaggerates, and the dishonesty will

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  • Proofread your applications.Check your application forms and essays for correct spelling and

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  • grammar usage.

     

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  • Ask a teacher or parent to review your application. It sometimes helps to have a second pair of

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  • eyes read over your application. They can catch errors you missed and make helpful suggestions.

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  • But don't allow your parents to edit all the life out of your essay. Discuss the essay with them, but

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  • don't let them rewrite it.

 

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